Bible Verse Wednesday: Without Faith

And without faith it is impossible to please God, because anyone who comes to him must believe that he exists and that he rewards those who earnestly seek him.

Hebrews 11:6

Broadway Tuesday: Nick Pitera

Okay, guys, today I am going to share something SUPER cool with you.

There's this guy named Nick Pitera, who works at Pixar doing animations.
And he is AWESOME.

He's been doing videos on youtube like "One-Man Disney Movie" and "One-Man Les Miserables".

All of them are great! He has a beautiful voice. Here he is in his "One-Man Phantom of the Opera".

Book Review Monday: I'm Reading...

Okay, guys, I did not have the time to finish a book to give you a review today. Sorry about that!

I'll tell you what I've been up to instead.
I've been working on pre-edits for my novel, Swept to Sea, and that's given me little time for reading.
Also, I had an interview about playwriting for a group at a local professional theatre.
So, alas, I haven't done a lot of reading.

I wish I'd finished reading a book for you today!

What are you reading today? What's on your to-be-read list?

Bible Verse Sunday: Every Word of God

Every word of God is pure: he is a shield unto them that put their trust in him.

Proverbs 30:5

Writing Friday: Critiquing

Well, I asked you all in last week's post what you would like to see in my weekly "writing" posts.

The majority of commenters said that you'd like to see both posts filled with tips on writing and also posts highlighting my novel, "Swept to Sea".

So,  for today, I will share some writing tips, and later on in the month I'll talk about "Swept to Sea". Okay? Okay.


As a writer, whether you like it or not, you spend a lot of time critiquing. Critiquing your own work, or others' work, you critique nonetheless.

You may have a critique partner or be a member of a critique circle, or you may just want to self-edit your own writing. First of all, you may ask how you get a critique partner or circle.

I've tried many methods and there are more than the ones I've tried.

You could...

• Join an online critique circle in your genre 
• Become a member of an online writers' association like ACFW
• Join a blogging/ Facebook writer's community like Go Teen Writers
• Google local writer's groups (perhaps there's one at your local library or bookstore)

And there are probably more that I'm probably forgetting to mention.

So, once you find a critique partner, what do you do?

Settle on an expected time for completing critiques if you're with a partner, or learn the group's rules. You may be able to produce and critique one chapter a week, or one chapter a month even.

Next, decide how much of a critique you want to receive or give. Full critique? Critique on writing style, or story ideas? Or just an extra eye for grammatical and spelling errors?

Then, critique. Give your honest opinion, but be polite about it. Make sure your partner knows you are saying your opinion only, and don't say anything too negative. Writers can take comments on their work very personally. Never say "YOU" when referring to the piece, rather say "this scene" or something of the like. Balance your "negative" comments with some "positive" comments. Nobody likes to hear nothing but negative about their novel.

Also, when receiving a critique, do not get defensive. If you don't like a comment you got, set it aside for a while and come back later. You don't have to agree with everyone. If three or more people comment on the same thing, consider changing it.

Well, that's all I have for today. Do you have any questions about critiquing? Have you critiqued before?Did you enjoy it or dislike it? Next week I'll talk about critiquing your OWN work.  

Music Thursday: Postcard From Paris

Ugh its August already, guys! That means I start school soon. :( Waaaaaaaah :(

Anyway, today I thought I'd share with you another Band Perry song.

Here's a good song with a very cute music video, "Postcard From Paris".

I just love The Band Perry's music videos. :)